Fransiskus Kelvin Simanto
student
Universitas Lambung Mangkurat
Indonesia
Urban Design and Landscape
Tourism trends in Indonesia are currently experiencing a transformation from mass tourism to alternative tourism which prioritizes natural and cultural… more
Mingshan Fang
advisor
Illinois Institute of Technology, College of Architecture
United States of America
sustainability, aviation more
The submission for the Agrotourism project in Bati-Bati presents a visionary approach but is notably incomplete, missing essential architectural technical drawings like floor plans, sections, or detailed illustrations. There is an absence of documentation or diagrams elucidating the origin or reference for the architectural language employed. Reliance on visual rendering software for presentation, without substantial refinement, suggests a disparity between the scope of work envisioned and the quality of work presented. Furthermore, the space design and planning exhibit a level of uniformity and repetition, indicating a consistent guiding principle behind the design language, yet lacking diversity and depth in its execution. This uniform approach to design language and planning necessitates a more comprehensive and detailed presentation to fully articulate the project's innovative vision and its adherence to ecological architectural principles.
Dear Mingshan Fang, thank you for your advice, it is a honor for me. I will be completing the submission. Thanks