Elsa Abi Ramia

advisor

USEK - Holy spirit University of Kaslik

Lebanese

My main focus is architecture in motion and sustainable architecture. As an architect and a dancer,… more

Dear Bagus,

First of all, I would like to congratulate you on becoming a new member of Inspireli awards family!
I truly appreciate your site analysis and sustainable conceptual approach … Your architecture and main idea are not only about organic shapes and landmarks but also a smart ecological building!
But when it comes to the design phase, I think what is missing are green spaces and sustainable elements:
Adding some solar panels, renewable energy, green walls, green roof, Gardens, atriums … can add a more sustainable touch.
When it comes to the structure, you can use the voids as structural elements in the ground floor instead of adding columns… That will give the building a more organic and fluid approach.
Furthermore, you can add a mass plan at a bigger scale that shows your building with its surroundings or a general section for the building with the city… that will highlight your rotations and the vision for each rotation on several levels. Also, it will show the scale of the building with its surroundings.

On a side note, you have a very creative and artistic touch in the plans and the way you approach your design and organic shapes.

Keep up the good work! Best of luck in your upcoming projects.

Best regards,
Elsa