John Paul Austria

advisor

University of the Philippines

Filipino

Design and consultancy Architecture Instructor at BPSU High Rise Building, Horizontal and Vertical… more

hi, first it is not clear what building or structure are you proposing with your presentation. You must show first what kind of proposal it is to further understand by the reader. Commenting on the design, it seems in a very simple way you showcase your design problem, that it should be low structures uploading the benefits of a mountain.

Improve your title and improve the design output since it will be your architecture resemblance