Аnastasia Bagdasaryan
student
Kuban State University - Faculty of Architecture
Russian Federation
Architecture
The basis for choosing the topic of this work was the creation of a new recreational zone in the region with increased comfort, where a person can receive a… more
Gershon Pocorni
advisor
www.grparchitects.com
Dutch
GRParchitects, Focus on Green Building Solutions more
The goal of the project could be more focused on the problem and why we need this wellness center and that makes it easier to explain the solutions which is the design concept.
The presentation is amazing detailed but for presentations you don't need a lot of details just show the 3D and maybe one 3D section , think less is more but less also creates better focus and makes the concept flawless to much details makes it messy.
The design is amazing love it, the only thing that is missing is that I don't see the wellness good presented in the design, because this also could be an apartment building, office or a shopping mall.
I think that all designs should have a unique selling point and that main focus is missing