Gilang P. Wastanu
student
Institut Teknologi Indonesia
Indonesia
Architecture
The increase in population and activities in urban areas results in an increase in the amount of waste. The waste consists of various kinds and has a large… more
Saimir Kristo, Prof. Asoc. P.hD.
advisor
BARLETI University
Albanian
Saimir Kristo, Prof. Asoc. P.hD. is an architect and urban designer, currently founder of the… more
The project demonstrates a commendable ambition and sensitivity toward both spatial context and user experience. It is evident that the student has invested effort into understanding the narrative and identity of the site, and has attempted to translate this into architectural language.
I encourage further refinement in three areas:
Clarity of Conceptual Framework – The architectural idea would benefit from a clearer narrative arc that ties the concept, function, and form together. A more defined diagrammatic explanation or conceptual model could elevate the project's communicative power.
Material and Structural Resolution – While the visualizations are evocative, a deeper exploration of material logic and construction methods would reinforce the proposal’s credibility and depth. Consider how materials perform in relation to climate, sustainability, and the user’s tactile experience.
Spatial Sequences and Human Scale – The project could be strengthened by more attention to transitions between interior and exterior spaces, and how users engage with the building across time and activity. Sections and detailed plans illustrating human interaction would be valuable here.
Overall, this is a strong project with the potential to grow into a highly resolved architectural proposal. I congratulate the student on their commitment and encourage them to continue developing their critical and technical thinking in parallel.