Parisa Sherafati, Sedighe Eskandarpour, Mahsa Saedizade
student
Shiraz University
Islamic Republic of Iran
Architecture
The green transition element is designed in such a way to interact with the users of the space so that they can linger a moment in the hustle and bustle of the… more
Esmaeil GHASEMZADEH
advisor
Islamic Republic of Iran
My architecture begins in silence — in listening to the ground before drawing a line.I do not seek… more
This project addresses a small but critical urban scale with clarity and restraint. Rather than attempting to solve the city at large, it focuses on the moment of transition—where movement slows down and the body becomes aware of space, air, and presence. The strength of the proposal lies in its understanding of urban fatigue and its translation into an architectural experience that is both temporary and meaningful.The combination of greenery, mist, and a permeable vertical structure creates a layered spatial condition that operates between object and atmosphere. The project does not rely on form alone; instead, it builds its architectural value through interaction, sensory engagement, and time-based experience. The drawings clearly communicate how the system responds to human presence, and the decision to keep the structure portable and adaptable reinforces its relevance within diverse urban contexts.What is particularly successful is the project’s ability to remain modest in scale while still engaging environmental, social, and technological concerns. This balance gives the proposal credibility as an urban intervention rather than a purely conceptual installation.
Esmaeil Ghasemzadeh
My advice is to deepen the project’s architectural rigor by developing the system beyond its initial experiential impact. While the interaction through mist and greenery is convincing, the project would benefit from a clearer articulation of duration, maintenance, and repetition over time—how the structure performs after weeks, months, or seasonal changes.From a spatial perspective, refining the relationship between entry, pause, and exit could strengthen the user experience. Introducing subtle hierarchy—through density of vertical elements, variation in height, or modulation of mist intensity—would help guide movement and create more legible zones within the installation
Additionally, expanding the technical section to address water circulation, filtration, and energy consumption in a more architectural manner would elevate the proposal from an environmental idea to a fully resolved urban system. A small set of precise construction details or assembly sequences could significantly enhance the project’s credibility and communicative strength.Overall, by slightly reducing descriptive text and allowing spatial logic, sections, and system diagrams to carry more weight, the project can present itself with greater confidence and architectural clarity.
Esmaeil Ghasemzadeh
20.12.2025