XuDong Zhang
student
Guangxi Arts University
China
Architecture
In this era of not "healthy", the probability of children's physical and psychological illness has been greatly improved, children's immunity and adults are… more
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Cairo University, Faculty of Engineering Architecture Department.
Egypt
My architectural focus is deeply rooted in urban design and the creation of sustainable… more
Your illustrations are both powerful and expressive—beautifully done. The final interior shot, depicting the narrow wooden corridor, is particularly evocative and carries emotional depth. However, from a practical standpoint, the longitudinal corridor as shown may present challenges in terms of safety and emergency circulation, which is something worth reconsidering.
The restaurant rendering is visually striking, especially with the use of black-and-white zigzag patterns. If these are intentional, it would be helpful to briefly explain their conceptual or cultural significance. Additionally, a gentle suggestion regarding material selection: considering this is a family-oriented space where children will sit, learn, and play, it may be beneficial to explore flooring options that are softer, warmer, and more child-friendly.
The idea of a family courtyard is very well thought out and adds a beautiful layer of social interaction and inclusivity.