Irina Kichanova
student
RUDN University
Russian Federation
Architecture
"Pyil", which translates from Russian as dust, is a complex, village and observatory built specifically for those who love space. Cosmic dust is the basis of… more
Mohamed Noeman Coutry
advisor
Cairo University, Faculty of Engineering Architecture Department.
Egyptian
My architecture focuses on seamlessly integrating biomimetic principles and sustainable designs… more
“Pyil” presents a poetic and imaginative concept grounded in cosmology, ecology, and narrative symbolism, envisioning architecture as a living organism tied to lunar cycles and the steppe landscape. While the thematic depth is commendable, the project suffers from a lack of architectural rigor.
To elevate the project, the poetic narrative must be translated into a clear architectural system grounded in real-world parameters. Begin by introducing computational tools to simulate growth patterns, site behavior, or lunar rhythms. Redesign the spatial layout using environmental inputs like sun, wind, and slope to generate functional clustering. Materially, explore construction methods that align with the “dust-born” theme—such as rammed earth or robotic earth printing. Replace abstract gestures with one deeply developed architectural element, like a responsive rooftop or adaptive dwelling unit. Lastly, ensure that every visual—diagram or rendering—communicates not just concept, but performance, structure, and spatial clarity.