Nour Yasser Safa

advisor

South Dakota School of Mines and Technology

United States of America

My architectural journey centers on rebuilding communities through resilient and context-sensitive… more

Your project addresses key urban issues such as drainage, traffic flow, and recreational space, which shows a solid understanding of the site’s needs. However, the technical details are quite limited. Expanding on the construction methods, materials, and project timeline would strengthen your proposal and demonstrate practical planning skills.


It would also help to clarify how the drainage improvements will integrate with the traffic and road network solutions. A clear connection between these elements will show a comprehensive approach to urban engineering challenges. Including sustainability features like permeable pavements or green barriers could enhance environmental benefits and community health.

Additionally, consider outlining risk management strategies, especially for water logging during construction, and propose maintenance and monitoring plans for long-term functionality. Addressing safety measures for pedestrians during construction would further demonstrate thoughtful project management.

Overall, deepening the technical and management aspects while emphasizing sustainability and community impact will improve your project.