Franc Obguia

advisor

Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City

Philippines

Architecture and Sustainability more

The presentation for this project is well-organized, with a clear visual hierarchy that effectively communicates the core values of Integrity, Professionalism, and Entrepreneurship (IPE). The concept is grounded in the cultural identity of the Ciputra Group and is clearly expressed in the massing strategy and volumetric articulation of the building. The use of height and openness to support collaborative learning and networking is a thoughtful design move that aligns well with the project's goals.

The renders are sleek and elegant, successfully portraying the architectural intent and material choices. The use of smart glass and double glazing not only demonstrates your attention to sustainable design but also showcases a forward-thinking approach to user comfort and energy efficiency. Your statements were also well-written—succinct yet meaningful, and they reveal a solid grasp of design logic and environmental considerations.

As you continue to refine the project, I suggest enhancing the realism of vegetation and materials in the visuals. Including human figures in the renders would make the scenes feel more alive and relatable, helping viewers understand the scale and user experience. Additionally, for better clarity—especially in a design competition setting—consider adding detailed floor plans and more diagrams. These elements are essential in architectural storytelling and help judges and readers understand spatial functions and design strategies more intuitively.

Thank you, Marsha Indrasakti, and congratulations for joining the Inspireli Competition. Your proposal already reflects a strong conceptual direction and technical awareness. With a few more layers of development, this project can truly shine as a built environment that mirrors both visionary design and entrepreneurial spirit. Great work!