Aqsa Mansha
student
University of Karachi, Architecture Program, Department of Visual Studies
Pakistan
Architecture
This project was inspired by a punjabi poetry which translates as "Our Partition Cost us dearly River Chenab often asks river Ravi How my dear brother river… more
Franc Obguia
advisor
Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City
Philippines
Architecture and Sustainability. Top 8 Finalist – Asia Young Designer Awards (AYDA) Philippines… more
This project is quite moving and well-thought-out. The way you've used poetry to inspire the design creates a deep emotional connection that really stands out. Your floor plans are strong, with a clear understanding of how people will interact in these spaces, and the connection between them feels meaningful. You’ve really considered the flow and functionality, which is impressive.
The renders themselves are good, but I think they can be pushed further. Maybe work on refining the materials, lighting, and textures to give it a bit more depth. Adding more people to the visuals could really bring the space to life and make it feel more human. It would help emphasize the unity you're aiming for, showing how people cross borders and come together in this space.
I can sense the potential of this concept, especially with how the project focuses on transforming the border into a place of connection rather than division. It’s a thoughtful approach that speaks to the power of architecture in bridging cultures.
Thank you, Aqsa Mansha, for joining the Inspireli competition, and congratulations on bringing this powerful narrative into architectural form. It's a challenging location to work with, but you’ve really embraced it. Keep pushing your design forward – it’s something truly meaningful.