Franc Obguia

advisor

Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City

Philippines

Architecture and Sustainability more

Your project, Concert hall for 6,200 spectators, Kirovsky district, Kazan City, presents a bold and compelling vision for a concert hall that successfully balances conceptual ambition with functional clarity. The presentation is thoughtfully structured—beginning with a strong narrative foundation and progressing fluidly into architectural expression. The inclusion of raw sketches and design process drawings adds a powerful layer of authenticity, allowing us to see the evolution of your idea and your control over both form and structure. Using flower petals as a generative concept brings softness and symbolism to the dramatic deconstructivist form, resulting in an engaging architectural identity.

The renderings effectively communicate the massing and spatial intent of your design. The exterior is striking in scale and composition, with your use of transparent surfaces and recycled plastic panels reflecting both innovation and sustainability. However, the interior visualizations could be further elevated by incorporating realistic materials, color palettes, people, and lighting to create a more immersive experience. Currently, the use of white interiors flattens the atmosphere—adding textures, finishes, and lighting would better capture the vibrancy you describe in your statements and render the spaces more believable and user-oriented.

Your floor plans are well-developed, with a clear understanding of circulation and zoning required for a high-capacity venue. The planning appears sensitive to user flow and public engagement, which is essential in a civic structure of this scale. The interior programming—featuring rest areas, a restaurant, and an exhibition space—demonstrates a commitment to creating a full experiential environment beyond just the performance space.

The color palette chosen for the presentation board is cohesive and well-considered, supporting the architectural language and drawing attention to key aspects without overwhelming the viewer. It resonates well with your design intent and enhances the board’s visual appeal.

Thank you, Aigul Shornikova, and congratulations for participating in the Inspireli Competition. Your project is a commendable response to the challenge, offering both artistic vision and thoughtful technical integration. It’s also exciting to see your approach to sustainability through materials and your attention to social utility. Your design process, especially the raw structural development, added depth to your presentation. Keep pushing your visualizations to reflect the richness of your design—especially through enhanced rendering techniques like lighting, realistic materials, and contextual elements. Your direction is promising, and we look forward to seeing your architectural voice evolve even further.