Weronika Bałazy
student
Cracow Technical University (Politechnika Krakowska), Kraków
Poland
Architecture
The main idea of the project, both in terms of urban planning and architecture, is the idea of two gates - Black and White. The Black Gate is meant to… more
Mohammad Reza Asgari
advisor
International Imam Khomeini University
Islamic Republic of Iran
My favorite approach to architecture is rooted in crafting spaces that go beyond functionality,… more
Your project presents a powerful and symbolic concept, using the Black and White Gates to represent the past and future, and drawing a strong parallel between the story of Moses and Oskar Schindler. The idea of splitting the museum with a central path that guides visitors—much like the parted Red Sea—is emotionally engaging and spatially clear. Transforming the old production hall into an exhibition space, with towering fabric walls that evoke the weight of history, is particularly effective.
However, while the concept is strong, the architectural presentation could be more refined. The connections between spaces, the structure of the central path, and elements like the green roof or sculpted entrance need clearer visual representation and more detail. Strengthening the visual materials and technical clarity would help match the power of the narrative with a more convincing architectural resolution.
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