Franc Obguia

advisor

Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City

Philippines

Architecture and Sustainability more

Your project presents a beautifully structured design narrative that instantly draws attention. The central concept—using a single architectural element, the stair, to guide the spatial journey—is both poetic and powerful. It anchors the design, providing a sense of rhythm and continuity, while also serving as a symbolic and functional focal point. The way this stair weaves through the buildings and opens into the square not only creates an architectural connection between the old and the new but also invites the public to participate in the story of the space.

The renderings you provided are visually strong and evocative. They effectively highlight materiality, transparency, and light—particularly where the intervention meets the historical context. The textures of wood, glass, and brick interplay harmoniously, supporting the idea of modern interventions that respect and enhance heritage. The render angles you chose successfully communicate both intimate and public aspects of the design.

Your floorplans are well detailed and clearly laid out, reflecting a solid understanding of spatial flow and user experience. The inclusion of programs such as the community library and elevated communal space shows a thoughtful commitment to user needs, promoting interaction, learning, and inclusivity. This functional layering is very much in tune with contemporary urban values and enriches the social potential of the space.

Visually, the presentation board stands out for its refined and deliberate use of color. The palette feels warm, elegant, and contextual—working in harmony with your material choices. The restraint and balance in graphic language allow the content to speak clearly without distraction, elevating the professionalism of your overall submission.

Your statements resonate with clarity and intention. The idea of bridging eras, sparking dialogue between old and new, and returning space to the community is not only timely but also deeply human. This kind of architectural storytelling—where a single gesture like a stair becomes a vessel for narrative and civic engagement—is a mark of thoughtful design.

Thank you, Vignesh Prabhakaran, Akshaya Priya, and congratulations on your contribution to the Inspireli Competition. Projects like yours reflect not only design skill but also empathy and imagination. Your intervention is a quiet yet powerful reminder of architecture’s role in honoring memory while shaping the future. Keep pursuing this balance—your path as an architect is very promising.

Dear Franc Obguia,
It was really nice to read your feedback, it would also be helpful if you could tell us on what areas needs improvement and could've been different or better?We really appreciate your feedback!Thank you!