Bishoy Latif
student
Faculty of Fine Arts, Alexandria University in Alexandria
Egypt
Architecture
The main idea of the project is to try to make the Sohag Sculpture Center an educational, cultural and artistic centre by exploiting the limestone found in… more
Omid Abbassi
advisor
Budapest University of Technology and Economics
Iranian
Architecture is a dangerous mixture of power and impotence." ( Rem Koolhaas ) more
Dear Bishoy,
Congratulations on your nicely considered and well-developed project! I’ll briefly highlight a few key points:
1-Topic and Idea Development: Choosing such a unique topic and expanding your concept around it is a real strength. The only small suggestion is to better define the identity of each subspace to avoid a general narration and add more precision.
2-Diagrams and Technical Drawings: Your plans, sections, elevations, and diagrams are very well prepared and clearly communicate the idea. To make the project even stronger, consider adding some technical details like wall sections or key detailed sections.
3-Visual Presentation: Your visuals are well connected to the concept, and the use of figures really helps convey the atmosphere of the spaces.
Wishing you a bright and successful journey in architecture!
Best regards,
Omid