YUSUF JATAU
student
CIU
Cyprus
Architecture
The competition requires participants to envision and design a groundbreaking community center dedicated to neuroscience, situated within the prestigious Salk… more
Franc Obguia
advisor
Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City
Philippines
Architecture and Sustainability. Top 8 Finalist – Asia Young Designer Awards (AYDA) Philippines… more
The concept of your project is thoughtfully created and clearly rooted in a deep understanding of neuroscience and its architectural translation. I genuinely love the idea and the way you’ve embodied neural activity and connectivity in the form and circulation of the building. It’s a strong and compelling interpretation of the competition brief. Your design process was also evident, and it reflects the time and effort you put into developing a meaningful and innovative space.
Your presentation and plans are well-composed. They communicate the spatial relationships and functional flow of the project effectively. The zoning of spaces aligned with neurological themes shows a clever and informed response to the program. I especially appreciate the intention behind guiding users through intuitive paths that mimic synaptic movement. That level of narrative elevates the design’s educational and experiential value.
One area I suggest you focus on further is the quality of your perspectives. While the building design is clearly strong, the renders can be improved by adding more life—such as realistic vegetation, human figures, and environmental context. These elements will help your audience better visualize the atmosphere and function of the space. I know how much work went into developing the architecture itself, but it would be helpful to explore how to present your ideas in a way that is more emotionally engaging and presentation board–ready.
YUSUF JATAU, you’ve done a great job. I truly appreciate the effort you put into conceptualizing such a complex and layered project. With stronger visual storytelling in your renders and presentation graphics, your architectural intent will come across even more powerfully. Thank you for joining Inspireli and congrats!
Dear Franc Obguia, Thank you so much for your incredibly insightful and encouraging feedback on my project submission. I’m truly grateful for the time and attention you’ve given to reviewing my work, and I deeply appreciate your kind words about the conceptual strength and neuroscientific foundation of the design.
Your observations about the spatial narrative and functional flow mean a lot to me, as I aimed to create a meaningful connection between architecture and neuroscience. I’m especially glad that the thematic zoning and synaptic-inspired circulation resonated with you—it’s rewarding to know that the core ideas came across effectively.
Your constructive suggestion regarding the perspectives and renders is invaluable. I completely agree that enhancing the visual storytelling with more life, context, and atmosphere would elevate the project’s emotional and experiential impact. Moving forward, I’ll certainly focus on refining these aspects to better communicate the architectural intent and create more engaging presentations.
Thank you again for your thoughtful critique and for recognizing the effort behind this project. Your feedback has not only motivated me but also given me clear direction for improvement. I’m honored to have participated in Inspireli and grateful for the opportunity to learn and grow through this experience.