Franc Obguia

advisor

Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City

Philippines

Architecture and Sustainability more

The concept presented shows an interesting and thoughtful approach to addressing climate challenges in learning environments. The idea of using mobile, removable blocks paired with natural insulation like savanna grasses is innovative and speaks to a resourceful use of local materials. The focus on student comfort during both hot and cooler seasons is a relevant and meaningful design direction, especially for educational spaces in tropical or semi-arid climates.

That said, the current draft feels more like an early-stage concept rather than a finalized presentation. The rough draft is okay, and it shows that the idea is starting to take form. However, for a competition like this, it’s important to elevate the quality of the graphics and layout. A more professional presentation would help communicate the concept more effectively and allow the jury or viewers to better understand and appreciate the proposal.

The use of acacia wood and locally sourced materials like grasses for insulation is commendable, especially when considering sustainability and ease of construction. Including additional data or diagrams—such as climate charts or simple thermal performance illustrations—could further support the technical feasibility of the design and strengthen your argument for material choices.

This is a good starting point. With clearer graphics, more structure to the visual presentation, and some expansion on technical details or site context, this proposal can become much more impactful.

Thank you, Samsonova Nataly, for joining and sharing your idea—we hope to see how you continue to develop and refine it.