emine erdoğan
student
Bolu Abant Izzet Baysal University, Faculty of Architecture
Turkey
Architecture
Memory in space is defined as traces in space or in memory; it represents both a symbol of time and the place where experience occurs. The concept of the… more
Abeer Mohammed
advisor
Tanta University
Egypt
My Architectural Focus As a Full Professor of Architecture and Building Technology, my… more
Dear Emine,
Your project presents a compelling exploration of the interplay between memory and architecture. The conceptual framework distinguishing between ephemeral and permanent memory through spatial design is both intellectually stimulating and architecturally significant.
Strengths:
1. Conceptual Depth: The delineation between ephemeral and permanent memory, manifested through the spatial organization of the museum, demonstrates a profound understanding of how architecture can embody abstract concepts. The use of fractured walls at the entrance to signify transient experiences is particularly evocative.
2. Functional Zoning: The clear separation of exhibition areas, administrative functions, training, and social spaces indicates a thoughtful approach to programmatic requirements, ensuring that each function supports the overarching narrative of the museum.
3. Structural Considerations: The implementation of I-profile carriers to accommodate large openings suggests a practical response to structural demands, facilitating open and flexible interior spaces conducive to varied exhibitions.
Areas for Enhancement:
1. Materiality and Sensory Experience: While the conceptual aspects are well-articulated, further development of material choices and their sensory impacts could enrich the visitor experience. Consider how materials can evoke memory or contribute to the ephemeral versus permanent dichotomy.
2. Environmental Integration: Exploring how the building interacts with its surrounding environment, including considerations for natural light, ventilation, and landscape integration, would enhance the sustainability and contextual responsiveness of the design.
3. User Journey and Accessibility: A more detailed articulation of the visitor's journey through the museum, including accessibility considerations, would ensure that the spatial narrative is inclusive and navigable for all users.
Conclusion:
Your project successfully bridges theoretical concepts with architectural expression, offering a nuanced perspective on how spaces can encapsulate and convey memory. By further refining material selections, environmental strategies, and user experience considerations, the design can achieve a more holistic and impactful realization.
Best regards,
Prof. Abeer Samy
Al Majmaah University