Eron Berisha, Bledar Hazrolli
student
University of Prishtina
Kosovo
Architecture
The Peja Culture Pavilion is a visionary architectural project aimed at transforming a historically significant site in the heart of Peja, Kosovo, into a… more
Morteza Asghari Vahed
advisor
Tabriz university
Islamic Republic of Iran
"The development of geometric structures under conditions that foster a flexible and responsive… more
Final Critique Summary | Nika Architecture
Having reviewed this student project, our first impression is one of bold formal ambition — a clear attempt to move beyond conventional architectural tropes and treat architecture as a conceptual language, rather than a mere reaction to programmatic demands.
At Nika Architecture, we firmly believe that form only becomes architecture when it carries narrative, function, and human experience. This is a conceptually rich project with strong potential to become a thoughtful and intentional piece of architecture. However, it requires focused refinement to evolve into a more resolved and grounded design.
What Works Well
• A primary concept built on the fusion and divergence of volumes, creating dynamic formal relationships
• A conscious effort to explore spatial diversity and controlled transparency
• A confident and visually engaging presentation of diagrams and renderings
Areas for Development
• The conceptual narrative needs to be more clearly articulated in writing to establish a strong foundation for the design process and effectively guide the viewer through the project’s logic.
• The spatial organization within plans and sections lacks clarity; functional logic regarding circulation, zoning, and hierarchy must be sharpened.
• While the geometric language is aesthetically compelling, it needs to be supported by a robust structural and constructional rationale — bridging the gap between expressive form and buildable reality.
• The human experience of space is underrepresented in the visuals; without the presence of light, material texture, and scale, the work risks becoming sculptural rather than architectural.
Recommended Next Steps
1. Compose a concise, defensible design statement to communicate the project's central idea
2. Develop form evolution diagrams and spatial function analyses to reveal the project’s internal logic
3. Rework the plans with attention to circulation flow, spatial hierarchy, and adaptability
4. Establish a concept-driven structural logic to anchor the formal system in real-world feasibility
5. Enrich the renderings with atmosphere — daylight, material expression, and the presence of people to evoke the lived experience of the architecture
Final Reflection
This project lays down a solid foundation with a clear architectural intention. With deeper reflection on the relationship between form, function, and user experience, it can grow into a meaningful, contextually sensitive piece of architecture.
At Nika Architecture, we see this as a courageous academic sketch — a brave first step in the journey of becoming an architect.
With clear next steps, this sketch could transform into a design voice worth listening to.
With respect,
Nika Architecture | Narrative by Design
Morteza Asghari Vahed