Mohammad Reza Asgari

advisor

International Imam Khomeini University

Islamic Republic of Iran

My favorite approach to architecture is rooted in crafting spaces that go beyond functionality,… more

The overall concept of the project is strong, with a clear focus on convenience, accessibility, and a vibrant atmosphere. The structural and technical aspects are crucial to the success of a project like this; however, they currently feel slightly underdeveloped and could benefit from further elaboration, especially considering the ambitious spatial and design goals. Adding detailed technical drawings and plans would significantly enhance the project, providing greater clarity and depth to the design intentions.

The ramp design is particularly successful in guiding and controlling the flow of movement through the space. Additionally, the yard created between the ramp and the building is one of the project's key strengths, offering an attractive and functional outdoor area.

From an aesthetic perspective, however, the ramp could be refined further. Its external appearance feels somewhat harsh and could be softened to better align with the intended smoothness of the movement it facilitates. Enhancing the exterior expression of the ramp would strengthen the overall architectural language and better integrate it with the mall’s design intent.

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