Bayan Maslem (Fernando)
student
Arab Private University for Science & Technology
Syrian Arab Republic
Architecture
On the Syrian coast in the city of Latakia and on one of the mountains overlooking the Mediterranean Sea, a tourist mountain resort is intended to be designed… more
Abhishek Rao
advisor
https://www.iiests.ac.in/
Indian
Abhishek Rao is a budding urbanist, licensed architect, noted artist, illustrator and the founder… more
Hi Bayan,
Thanks for submitting your work to IA.
While you have attempted to develop an interesting form, you may consider these steps for further iteration of your design and presentation.
1. Scale up the floor plans and increase the legend font size
2. Provide English translation of legends alongside for universal readability of your drawing
3. As far as existing contours are concerned, your floor layout is not clearly responding with clarity on how the design fits the terrain. Adding levels to your plan might help along with providing a detained section apart from views.
4. Show the evolution of design output and process.
5. Rethink about how your design fits in a hilly landscape.
6. Add some part of the mountain in the background and some human figures in your views to make it more meaningful.
Keep it up!
Thanks Abhishek Rao,
I I will develop the project and take your comments into consideration.