Vladislava Sizonenko
student
СФУ ИАиД
Russian Federation
Architecture
The main idea of the project is to create a cultural space that will fill the gap in theatrical services in the Komarovsky Proezd area in the center of St.… more
Ramy Abi Antoun
advisor
USEK - Holy spirit University of Kaslik
Lebanon
Principal Architect / Founder at RAMAC, University instructor at USEK more
Your project presents a refreshing vision of how urban spaces can be transformed into healing environments. I particularly appreciate the sensitivity in blending architecture with nature, creating a dynamic and evolving experience for users. However, I recommend avoiding the use of strong symmetry in the design, as a more organic flow would better match the concept of a natural oasis. Also, it would strengthen the project if the architectural language were unified — for example, the landscaping uses circular forms, so the building geometry could echo the same softness for better harmony. Finally, improving the material expression and realism in the renderings would help fully transmit the richness of your concept.
Dear Ramy Abi Antoun, I sincerely thank you for your valuable and thoughtful opinion about my project. Your recommendations on avoiding excessive symmetry and creating a more natural flow really help to make the concept more organic and harmonious. I will definitely take them into account when finalizing the architectural language, carefully harmonizing the building's shapes with the landscape design. I will also focus on increasing the material expressiveness of visualizations in order to more clearly convey the idea and atmosphere of the project. Thank you again for your advice and support — it is very important for my further development. Yours sincerely, Vladislava.