Rana Elish
student
Faculty of Fine Arts, Alexandria University in Alexandria
Egypt
Urban Design and Landscape
Concept : 1) creating spaces for children to feel freedom through soft-scapes and bringing the outside inside using ( orchid flowers) 2)USING colourful… more
Rim Zougheib
advisor
Lebanese University - Faculty of Fine Arts and Architecture
Lebanese
Architect, urban designer, developer, professor, and researcher. Head of the Architecture… more
• Concept: Strong and well-articulated. Focus on children and emotional impact is clear.
• Visual Language: Attractive and futuristic. Use of Voronoi adds identity.
• Color Scheme: Cheerful and vibrant, appropriate for the target users.
• Presentation Layout: Clear, organized, and visually engaging.
• Sections & Plans: Well-labeled but could benefit from more detailed annotation.
• Good thematic coherence between nature and learning.
• Variety of spaces (reading, courtyard, library) well-distributed.
• Add clearer function labels in the plan views.
• Include material textures in more detail.
• Add human scale in sections for better spatial understanding.
• Improve lighting render in night shot – it lacks depth.
25.06.2025