Erin Shah Afrin
student
Rajshahi University of Enginnering & Technology
Bangladesh
Architecture
Bangladesh, a global leader in the export of ready-made garments, is currently facing an environmental and industrial challenge due to the generation of over… more
Jacinta Uhalla
advisor
The Catholic University of America
United States of America
Construction, Sustainability, Historic & Preservation more
First the presentation pages feel cramped, don’t be afraid of using white spaces. However the Project responds well to the textile waste issues, with a good mix of sustainability, innovation and community engagement design solutions.
The user experience within the building is not expressed clearly. The design talks about sustainability and recycled materials but your architecture language didn’t highlight how these materials shape the building’s aesthetics. Space out your presentation layout for better clarity and communication. The presentation has so many information with no visual hierarchy try using (bolder headings or separate each sections clearly) this could improve readability.