PROJECTS FEEDBACK
Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.
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Observation Tower projects feedbacks
The project is very well presented, demonstrating strong skills in postproduction and renderings. The student shows a keen awareness of the natural landscape, and the incorporation of a green corridor into the master plan is a key aspect of the design. Sustainability practices have been introduced in detail, showcasing the student’s understanding of how various systems work together. The site analysis is also clear, emphasizing the project’s proximity to the rail and adjacent roads, which…
Samer Samarani
advisor
While drawing inspiration from fluid shapes that represent natural elements is an excellent conceptual starting point, the project should be more site-specific. It’s essential for the design to reflect the unique elements and surroundings of the site. By grounding the project in its location, the design will not only honor the natural environment but also create a more meaningful relationship between the architecture and its context. When parametric design is introduced, establishing clear…
Samer Samarani
advisor
I am very glad to see that the classification of senses and the activity area can be clearly analyzed and combined, which is undoubtedly a very beneficial thing for the visually impaired. The sensory understanding shown in the picture is also in place, as well as a reasonable understanding of relevant laws and regulations. What I want to say is that as a project with very practical needs, We may need to pay more attention to the understanding of some small scenes. For example, some scenes…
QingYang Jia
advisor
The starting point of the project is uplifting, to commemorate the nameless victims, and I think there is nothing wrong with the design process of the monument, but the expression could perhaps be a little more emotional, especially as an emotional structure, the notebook style may not be able to convey the emotional connection of war, reflection, grief in the first place. The treatment of the landscape is very good, but as an overall design you have to consider its response to the monument. I…
QingYang Jia
advisor
There is little sense of intrusion into the building, and it is better to have frames for intrusion. The legibility of the plan is low
Amir Kolivand
advisor
There is little sense of intrusion into the building, and it is better to have frames for intrusion.
Amir Kolivand
advisor
The use of transparent glass canopies creates heat in the environment. The use of plant canopies provides the possibility of creating better spaces
Amir Kolivand
advisor
Among several projects under - Schindler's Ark Saving Competition - that I reviewed I think your project closely follows the theme and overall context of the region. I like your process diagram and how you intend to maintain the overall look and appeal but the project could have been even more interesting if you had incorporated the actualities more strongly. History informs us that the place was used as a factory first for textile and later for enamelware; I strongly believe that traits of…
Himanshu Sanghani
advisor
Your project holds a significant value. The site requires much needed refurbishment as it has been in a lot of controversies but I feel the approach you have taken to re-establish the identity does not hold the strongest value or support the northern region of the site. I feel you should have chosen the programs for the site very carefully by understanding the context thoroughly. In last decade many of the news agency and/or reporters or agencies have mentioned that the space hold the highest…
Himanshu Sanghani
advisor
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