Riham Faragallah

advisor

Faculty of Fine Arts

Egypt

Design focus on using sustainable strategies and passive techniques to design a building that are… more

Dear Shahd,
Thank you for your great effort done in the project.

However, there are some comments that can help you to elevate the quality of your work.
- Concerning the concept lines of the project, it was expected to see the exact location of the atrium in the office building, so as to know if the lines of the atrium design match the lines of the of the building design (the atrium is a part of the whole building).
- The section line has many inclinations and does not show your nice idea that there are different levels and that the rest area floats on water.
- Also, the use of grey gravel, the fountain and LED Neon could add a sense of sustainability to your project.
- There is no mention for the idea behind the design of columns found in the atrium of the building.
- Some of the 3D illustrations lack thickness of stair steps, different levels of pathways, curbs, …etc. Furthermore, the different types of softscape mentioned are not shown in the perspectives (the used softscape are the same type).

It is advised to take into consideration in this type of projects to show the relation between your lines and the design of the building because they can’t be separated from each other.

Warm Regards !!

Riham Nady Faragallah