PROJECTS FEEDBACK
Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.
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Office projects feedbacks
1. Conceptual Clarity and Coherence Strengths: The concept of organizing the market by product category into distinct spatial zones is clear and effective. It mirrors traditional market logic while offering a contemporary architectural response. The circular layout and central atrium reinforce the idea of unity, guiding users intuitively while celebrating the market as a civic space. Suggestions: The idea of modular blocks forming a coherent whole is compelling; consider emphasizing this…
Reza Keshavarznorozpour
advisor
Maria Mazhar’s project addresses a deeply important social issue—the mental, emotional, and physical health of mothers from low socioeconomic backgrounds in informal settlements of Karachi. The design thoughtfully integrates cultural sensitivity and healing principles to create a facility that supports women during the vulnerable perinatal period. The single-level layout, prioritizing ease of access, combined with well-planned spaces for consultation, therapy, and childcare, reflects a user…
Omar Harb
advisor
Project Evaluation – "COSMOS CORRIDOR" Designer: Sonia Sharma Category: Exhibition Pavilion | Space & Technology | Educational Architecture Location: Adjacent to Vikram Sarabhai Space Centre, Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India Concept & Innovation: 9/10 The "COSMOS CORRIDOR" presents an original and visionary concept that pays homage to India’s space research legacy. The fusion of architecture and aerospace narrative is both imaginative and meaningful, offering a symbolic and experiential…
Omar Harb
advisor
Your project's concept for the car showroom thoughtfully addresses current trends and emphasizes the importance of creating environmentally friendly car dealerships is well-argued and remarkable. However, the lobby area featuring bookshelves in the background may not fully align with the modern and eco-conscious theme. In contrast, the green wall effectively embodies biophilic design principles, which have been shown to reduce stress and improve customer experience in commercial spaces. To…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your concept for the Chinese-style apparel store is both innovative and thoughtfully executed. To enhance the technical presentation, consider providing detailed illustrations of the rack's assembly, highlighting the bamboo joints and their structural integrity. Additionally, showcasing the rack's weight distribution and support mechanisms will offer a clearer understanding of its functionality and stability. Incorporating these elements will not only strengthen the technical narrative but…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your project is aesthetically compelling and showcases a strong design sensibility. Consider enriching the ceiling plan by detailing the selection of lighting fixtures and specifying lighting intensities. This will provide a clearer understanding of how lighting contributes to the ambiance and functionality of the space. Additionally, incorporating detailed construction drawings of the curved shelving units, especially in sectional views, would strengthen the project's technical depth and…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your urban renewal project exhibits a well-considered and innovative approach. The use of yellow as a distinguishing feature is particularly effective in highlighting key elements of the design. To further enhance the clarity and impact of your proposal, I recommend including street elevations that depict the surrounding context. These visualizations can provide a clearer understanding of how your project integrates with and transforms the existing urban fabric. Additionally, while the…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Congratulations on your thorough analysis. Your research demonstrates a deep understanding of the area's historical significance and urban dynamics. To further enrich your project, consider incorporating cross-sectional drawings of the pedestrian zones and adjacent streets. These visual elements can provide valuable insights into the spatial relationships, scale, and accessibility of the designed areas. Additionally, emphasizing visual illustrations and analyses over textual descriptions can…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your project, In the World of Fairy Tales, presents a captivating concept. The idea of incorporating observation towers to reveal new perspectives of adjacent territories is both imaginative and effective. To further enrich your presentation, consider including perspective drawings from a human eye level. This approach would vividly convey the unique views and experiences these towers offer, immersing the viewer in the narrative of your design. The walking route you've designed is poetic and…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
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