Maria Ogorodnikova, Egor Orlov
student
RUDN University
Russian Federation
Architecture
The factory seems to slowly expand, much like mycelium or rhizome, gradually taking over the city and becoming a city itself, extending its "tentacles" to… more
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Cairo University, Faculty of Engineering Architecture Department.
Egypt
My architectural focus is deeply rooted in urban design and the creation of sustainable… more
First and foremost, I would like to congratulate you on the beautifully executed illustrations . They are both evocative and well-crafted, effectively capturing the atmosphere of your proposal. It would be lovely to see additional interior perspectives, similar to the initial one you presented, along with a clearer indication of their placement within the overall spatial narrative. This would allow for a fuller appreciation of the experiential qualities you so thoughtfully described.
I would also encourage you to reflect more deeply on the shell structure and its supporting elements—consider whether these structural features are intended to be part of the architectural story or discreetly integrated. Your planning process is well-considered; however, the curved and polygonal forms of the atriums and courtyards prompt curiosity. If there is a conceptual or contextual reasoning behind these geometries, elaborating on that would further enrich the depth of your design.
Overall, your work is both sensitive and promising—well done.