Franc Obguia

advisor

Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City

Philippines

Architecture and Sustainability more

Your project PatchwArk offers a deeply considered and emotionally resonant approach to site redevelopment, weaving historical memory with contemporary living needs. The concept of "stitching" the rural and industrial landscape through a patchwork narrative is a compelling framework that adds both symbolic and functional clarity to your vision. The emphasis on intergenerational and interspecies community, privacy gradation, and natural ecosystems reveals a strong understanding of spatial relationships and user dynamics.

The presentation is well-structured and easy to navigate, guiding the viewer smoothly from concept to execution. The masterplan is especially well presented—clean, organized, and rich with intention. The layering of spaces from public to private is intuitive, and the patchwork logic helps in shaping zones that feel inclusive and community-driven. Your architectural references, particularly to Mies and the Tugendhat Villa, give the project historical depth while keeping it rooted in modern, human-centered design.

The architectural drawings and rendered visuals are thoughtful and enhance the storytelling. You’ve managed to balance technical information with emotional narrative, which is not easy to do. A special commendation goes to the research phase—your inclusion of a SWOT analysis is particularly noteworthy. It shows a comprehensive understanding of the site’s strengths and challenges, and how the proposed intervention responds strategically to these factors. The analysis helps anchor the project within real-world concerns, making it not only poetic but also practical.

Thank you, Edyta Kaszuba, and congratulations for participating in the Inspireli Competition. Your project demonstrates a keen eye for design and research, along with a sensitivity to both people and place. The clarity of your masterplan and the strength of your visual communication stand out—keep up the excellent work and continue exploring layered, story-rich architectural solutions.