Elijah Alao-Williams
student
University of Lagos, Akoka-yaba
Nigeria
Architecture
This project aims to create a harmonious blend of traditional architectural elements and modern design principles, encapsulating the essence of Neo-Heritage… more
Franc Obguia
advisor
Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City
Philippines
Architecture and Sustainability more
Your presentation for the Neo-Heritage Architecture project is quite strong, showcasing the design in a clear and organized manner. You've done a good job presenting the plans, sections, and overall drawing of the building. The architectural expression of blending traditional and modern elements is well communicated, and the idea of incorporating local materials and cultural significance into the design is compelling.
One suggestion for improvement is to provide more detailed plans, particularly in terms of how the furniture layout affects the flow and efficiency of the space. This will give a clearer understanding of how the design works in a functional sense, especially when considering the flexibility for diverse family dynamics. Additionally, it would be beneficial to include more interior perspectives, as this will further emphasize the relationship between aesthetics and functionality within the living space.
The perspective rendering is well done, capturing the essence of the design, but adding some interior perspectives, if possible, would provide a more complete visual of how the space feels and functions. This could also help to showcase the harmony between the cultural elements and modern design features.
The project is well thought out, and with a few enhancements in detail and visuals, it would become even more compelling.
Elijah Alao-Williams, keep up the great work, and I look forward to seeing your project continue to develop!