Omid Abbassi

advisor

Budapest University of Technology and Economics

Iranian

Architecture is a dangerous mixture of power and impotence." ( Rem Koolhaas ) more

Dear Sohaila,

Congratulations on participating in the Inspireli Awards! I’d like to briefly highlight a few strengths and areas for improvement.

1- I liked the idea of exposing customers to the characteristics of each section of the store, as you explained in your brief — a strong starting point. However, translating that idea into architecture would have benefited from more diagrams and abstract visual tools instead of relying mainly on actual images. I recommend using a more technical, conceptual visual language to present the initial idea.

2- Your visual presentation and CGI are at a good standard. The color palette and element arrangement effectively support the experiential quality of the design. However, adding human figures would help better communicate the scale and atmosphere.

3- Since your project focuses on interiors, it would also be helpful to include axonometric or parallel-perspective drawings to highlight technical aspects. Additionally, alongside your floor plans, more elevations, sections, and detail drawings are needed to fully explain your design technically.

I wish you a successful architectural journey ahead.
Best regards,
Omid

Dear Omid Abbassi,
Thank you so much for your great suggestions, which I will definitely attempt to follow in my future projects, and thank you for your time.