Vadim Spirenkov
student
Yaroslavl State Technical University
Russian Federation
Architecture
The Tin Woodman project is an attempt to breathe new life into the architectural image of Yaroslavl — a city where modern residential buildings often fade… more
Nour Yasser Safa
advisor
South Dakota School of Mines and Technology
United States of America
My architectural journey centers on rebuilding communities through resilient and context-sensitive… more
I really appreciate the strong narrative behind the project and how the materials clearly express the story of transformation—it gives the building a unique identity that stands out in Yaroslavl’s context. The use of Corten and untreated steel creates a compelling contrast that feels raw yet purposeful. However, when it comes to the building’s form, especially the chamfered corners and angled projections, I find myself questioning their purpose. They seem somewhat random and don’t fully connect to the overall concept. It might have been more effective to explore these kinds of gestures in the landscape design instead, where they could have played a smarter, more integrated role in shaping the site experience. Although you did introduce some of these ideas in the courtyard with the yellow brick path leading to the green zone, which is a great symbolic touch, bringing more of that design logic into the outdoor spaces could help tie the project together better and make the architectural expression feel more intentional and harmonious.
Overall, the project has a strong foundation and a clear story, but refining the relationship between building form and landscape would make it even stronger.
The narrative and material choices are really strong; it’s refreshing to see architecture with such a clear story. That said, I’m not fully convinced by the chamfered corners and angled cuts in the building itself. They feel a bit arbitrary and might have worked better if expressed more thoughtfully in the landscape instead. Although you did bring some of that into the courtyard, refining it could really strengthen the overall coherence.
Dear Nour Yasser Safa,
Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and kind words. I truly appreciate your recognition of the narrative and material strategy — it means a lot coming from you. Your observations regarding the building form and its integration with the landscape are insightful and will be extremely helpful for further development of the project. I’ll definitely reflect on how to create a more cohesive relationship between the architecture and the surrounding environment.
Thank you again for your time and valuable perspective!