Rim Zougheib

advisor

Lebanese University - Faculty of Fine Arts and Architecture

Lebanese

Architect, urban designer, developer, professor, and researcher. Head of the Architecture… more

Absolutely! Here’s a more specific feedback and advice for the *last image* you shared:

The layout clearly emphasizes a central gathering space with radiating pathways, creating a strong focal point. The integration of green zones around built areas promotes a natural, open feel. The circular form helps organize movement intuitively.




- Strengthen the visual contrast between pathways and green areas to improve legibility.
- Add more detailed labeling for key program areas to guide the viewer.
- Consider softening the edges of built forms with landscaping to enhance the transition between structures and nature.
- Highlight entrances or access points more distinctly for better orientation.

Dear Rim Zougheib,
I sincerely thank you for your time and effort in reviewing my project and providing valuable feedback. Your detailed corrections and expert insights are extremely helpful in improving the quality of my work and preparing it for publication. I am truly grateful for your guidance and support."