Jan Malý
student
FAST VUT - Faculty of Civil Engineering, Brno University of Technology, Department of Architecture
Czech Republic
Architecture
The project deals with the design of a sustainable primary and nursery school in a rural area of northern Vietnam. Local children have difficult access to… more
Dear Jan,
The architecture design Tả Ngảo School integrates the project into the immediate landscape which is one of the most important things you must do whenever it’s possible, on your architectural designs, also on the presentation indicates that the project will be a sustainable school and you are proposing solar panels, rainwater collectors; and a green roof with the terrace fields and these characteristics make a positive impact on the project you are presenting, because you are giving the main function and also a cultural integration by using local materials such as bamboo grid, corrugated metal roofing, local stone and wooden frames for windows; and also you are providing general details of the location and the weather of the rural area of northern Vietnam which is important to know as well.
The technical information is clear, the order that you give on the presentation allows to understand the concept of the project, step by step and how to distribute the space, the functionality and also it states how can be built; this is important to include in every project so everyone can see your presentation and get the main idea of the design, even if is not an architect. These characteristics make your project more likely to be built. And also including a studio model will help you to level up your presentation and your proposal as you did on this project.
My advise is that you can improve your sections, by adding vertical measures and indicating the high of the interior space, and you can include more information by adding some notes to the sections as you did on the rest of the presentation; and make it on 2D and not as isometric so it look more technical or clean as the rest of the information you are providing. You can also select a color palette for your presentation, so it looks more unified.
To summit I appreciate the fact that you present the design Tả Ngảo School, because it is a great design, I wish you the best of luck by presenting your project! I hope these observations can be useful for your next projects and please let me know if I can help you with more ideas or observations, it’s my pleasure!
Best regards;
Arch. Liz Juarez