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Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.
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Supermarket projects feedbacks
Your project's concept for the car showroom thoughtfully addresses current trends and emphasizes the importance of creating environmentally friendly car dealerships is well-argued and remarkable. However, the lobby area featuring bookshelves in the background may not fully align with the modern and eco-conscious theme. In contrast, the green wall effectively embodies biophilic design principles, which have been shown to reduce stress and improve customer experience in commercial spaces. To…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your concept for the Chinese-style apparel store is both innovative and thoughtfully executed. To enhance the technical presentation, consider providing detailed illustrations of the rack's assembly, highlighting the bamboo joints and their structural integrity. Additionally, showcasing the rack's weight distribution and support mechanisms will offer a clearer understanding of its functionality and stability. Incorporating these elements will not only strengthen the technical narrative but…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your project is aesthetically compelling and showcases a strong design sensibility. Consider enriching the ceiling plan by detailing the selection of lighting fixtures and specifying lighting intensities. This will provide a clearer understanding of how lighting contributes to the ambiance and functionality of the space. Additionally, incorporating detailed construction drawings of the curved shelving units, especially in sectional views, would strengthen the project's technical depth and…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your urban renewal project exhibits a well-considered and innovative approach. The use of yellow as a distinguishing feature is particularly effective in highlighting key elements of the design. To further enhance the clarity and impact of your proposal, I recommend including street elevations that depict the surrounding context. These visualizations can provide a clearer understanding of how your project integrates with and transforms the existing urban fabric. Additionally, while the…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Congratulations on your thorough analysis. Your research demonstrates a deep understanding of the area's historical significance and urban dynamics. To further enrich your project, consider incorporating cross-sectional drawings of the pedestrian zones and adjacent streets. These visual elements can provide valuable insights into the spatial relationships, scale, and accessibility of the designed areas. Additionally, emphasizing visual illustrations and analyses over textual descriptions can…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your project, In the World of Fairy Tales, presents a captivating concept. The idea of incorporating observation towers to reveal new perspectives of adjacent territories is both imaginative and effective. To further enrich your presentation, consider including perspective drawings from a human eye level. This approach would vividly convey the unique views and experiences these towers offer, immersing the viewer in the narrative of your design. The walking route you've designed is poetic and…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
your inclusion of manual presentations and sketches is amazing, offering a tangible connection to your design process. The articulation of in-between spaces stands out, demonstrating a thoughtful approach from methodology and problem mapping to structural considerations. Well done! To further enrich your project, consider integrating streetscape design elements for the approaches leading to your development. Designing these streets with pedestrian safety and accessibility in mind can add depth…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Your design concepts are thoughtfully developed and effectively conveyed through your drawings. The clarity and coherence of your presentation are commendable. To further enrich your submission, consider incorporating a longitudinal section along the main axis of your design, accompanying this section with annotations could offer deeper insights into your design decisions and enhance the storytelling aspect of your project. Additionally, elaborating on the outdoor spaces—particularly the…
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Outstanding work—your project is a remarkable fusion of imagination, critical thinking, and design innovation. I wish you continued creativity and success. Best regards
Eman Mounir
advisor
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