Omer Turab Doganer
student
Ondokuzmayıs Üniversitesi
Turkey
Architecture
Analysis of the concept of space as a problematic on an urban scale In the context of the concept of open architecture; the problematic examination of the… more
Franc Obguia
advisor
Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City
Philippines
Architecture and Sustainability more
The presentation of your project, Samsun Urban Renewal Project, is structured exceptionally well, offering a clear and concise narrative of the design journey. The renders beautifully capture the spatial relationships and architectural elements, effectively showcasing the integration of private and public spaces within the mixed-use program. The detailed floorplans are a great asset, allowing us to see the careful consideration given to both function and form. Your approach to layering open and closed spaces adds a strong dynamic to the overall design, supporting both privacy and public interaction.
The color choices in the presentation board are well-executed, offering a sophisticated and cohesive palette that highlights the building's architectural details without overwhelming the viewer. The use of neutral tones allows the various building elements to stand out while maintaining a sense of harmony throughout the visuals. It's evident that you've considered the contextual identity of the city and neighborhood, which brings a grounded sense of place to the project.
However, I would suggest making the vegetation appear more realistic, perhaps through better texturing or using more dynamic plant types, which would bring the outdoor spaces to life. Additionally, adding human figures would give the renderings a greater sense of scale and make the spaces feel more vibrant and lively. Adjusting the material textures could also enhance the realism of the design, particularly in areas where light plays an important role in the building's expression.
The design concept itself is strong, particularly in how you've approached the integration of different functions and the attention to environmental factors such as light, sound, and climate. The transition from commercial to residential spaces with the thoughtful placement of the a la carte restaurant as a bridge is a brilliant touch, ensuring the privacy of residents while maintaining an inviting atmosphere for the public.
Thank you, Omer Turab Doganer, for participating in the Inspireli competition. Your project shows a thoughtful understanding of the complexities of urban life and space, and your innovative approach to mixed-use design demonstrates a great sensitivity to both functional and aesthetic needs. Congratulations on your submission!
Dear Franc Obguia, Thank you for your feedback on my project that I participated in the Inspireli competition. I will take your comments into consideration. Have a nice day.