daiki shimizu
student
Tokyo University of the Arts, Japan
Japan
Architecture
Project idea (purpose and goal) 1. Background and context Modern urban spaces are becoming more and more uniform and fixed as a result of prioritizing… more
Mirame Elsayed
advisor
Cairo University, Faculty of Engineering Architecture Department.
Egypt
My architectural focus is deeply rooted in urban design and the creation of sustainable… more
Your project presents a compelling conceptual framework and a thoughtfully articulated narrative. The meticulous attention to detail, especially in the construction elements, reflects a profound understanding of architectural intricacies and craftsmanship.
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