Saeed Shenakhteh

advisor

islamic azad unversity of redohen

iranian

As an architect with a positive view of the future of architecture and the impact of architecture… more

First, I would like to congratulate you on completing this project. This work represents a fresh perspective on architectural design and showcases your ability to understand fundamental design principles while integrating them with modern and sustainable concepts.

Strengths:

In-depth Studies: One of the aspects you’ve addressed well is the thorough research and formulation of theoretical foundations, which strengthens your design base.
Bold and Future-oriented Design: The presentation of a bold design that is also in harmony with the urban fabric reflects your deep understanding of architecture’s relationship with its surroundings.
Harmonious Geometry: The geometry of the project is well-aligned with the island itself, and the specified breaks in the site plan resonate effectively with all components.
Function and Functionalism: The design not only focuses on aesthetics but also considers the efficiency of spaces. Each area has been optimized according to its intended use.
Sustainability: The use of sustainable and scalable materials and technologies reflects an environmentally friendly approach that is increasingly important in today’s architecture.
Areas for Improvement:

Execution Details: It would be beneficial to provide more documentation in the execution details section to ensure that the construction process aligns with design theories.
Spatial Relationships: I hope you will focus more on the details of coordinating the interior spaces and creating proportions in your future work.
Deeper Analysis: A deeper analysis of the spatial relationships among different sections of the building could enhance the overall cohesion of the project.
Conclusion:

Overall, this project marks a milestone in your academic journey and demonstrates your profound understanding of contemporary architecture and its challenges. Supporting such projects can significantly contribute to the future of architecture.