FATEMH ALAHMADALALIWI
student
City University Malaysia
Malaysia
Architecture
"Rumah Wayang is more than just a name iteneipaulates the sphit, movement, ang purpose of the Wayang Kali cultural cent Drawing from the Malay word "wayang"… more
Abhishek Rao
advisor
Indian Institute of Engineering Science & Technology, Shibpur
Indian
Abhishek Rao is a budding urbanist, licensed architect, noted artist, illustrator and the founder… more
Dear Fatemh,
Congratulations on submitting your project!
I duly commend the effort and clarity with which you have executed the work.
Your design evolution process and its out comes quite well developed and contextual, as per the description of the project.
I also liked the theme you have chosen for the presentation of your drawings. Sheets are very well composed.
May consider a bit more on visual clarity, scale and legitimacy of certain figures and texts!
Best Wishes.
May consider a bit more on visual clarity, scale and legitimacy of certain figures and texts!
Dear Abhishek Rao,
Thank you so much for your kind words and valuable feedback. I truly appreciate your support and suggestions. I will definitely keep them in mind to improve my future work.
Best regards,
Fatemh