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The Conveyor Belt City of the New World

william farmer

student

University of Central Lancashire

United Kingdom

Architecture

The idea behind the project was to celebrate the distinction between the private port and the public residential district by creating a platform to allow views… more

Batool Musa

advisor

KU-TIMES

Pakistan

The soul of a space is its inhabitants. It's all about comprehending societal and human concerns. more

Hello William Farmer.
Congratulations on your project in INSPIRELI.
The project looks incomplete.
You have an interesting concept and idea to connect between the private port and the public residential by creating a platform. But in your presentation, nothing is highlighting that amazing idea that it makes hard to understand what is actually going on.
The spaces should be marked in the plans, section, and elevation, and some images are not been uploaded properly.
suggestions:
1. There should be more information on urban analysis, and Incorporate it into the project that shows how the project is going to fit with its surrounding, how the platform is connecting both the private port and the public residential district, and how it's going to celebrate.
2. The project idea should correlate to the drawings, also there should be more information in the project idea, and in the drawings.
3. The views may be more helpful to understanding the idea rather than the plans, sections, and elevations.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you
And Thank you INSPIRELI AWARDS

Best regards
Batool Musa Jaffari

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The Conveyor Belt City of the New World

william farmer

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